Wednesday, February 25, 2009

naisaiku challenge-

I got this comment from someone on my 3 ww about this haiku esque poem thingy and thought I would try it. So here goes.

Barbecue and beans
Cole slaw dreams and pretty things
Wiggle in your boots
COLE SLAW DREAMS AND PRETTY THINGS
Wiggle in your boots
Cole slaw dreams and pretty things
Barbecue and beans

Don’t look to the East
Sunskorch burns the eyes of Rome
Read! Paint! Sing new songs!
MARCH THE IDES OF MARCH!
Don’t look to the East
Sunskorch burns the eyes of Rome
Read! Paint! Sing new songs!
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3 comments:

  1. Andy SewinaFebruary 25, 2009 at 1:36 PM

    Hi Ande, glad you took up the challenge and posted some NaisaiKu.. The first one really made me smile, 'wiggle in your boots', love the terminology. Then, The Ides of March, Phew!

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  2. Wendy NaisaFebruary 25, 2009 at 1:47 PM

    These are great, barbecue and beans - you could teach this to kids, they'd love it... and the second one in a very different style to the first gives me the feel of an army on the march, also the repetition works well here.

    Many many thanks for taking The NaisaiKu.. Challenge! this week.

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  3. Tumblewords:February 25, 2009 at 9:52 PM

    Wow - these are great! Great!

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