Wednesday, March 4, 2009

I totally forgot to naisaiku yesterday-so I wrote two

Climb into the house
Mother patiently awaits
holding a cold stew
HARD FOR YOU TO CHOKE DOWN
holding a cold stew
mother patiently awaits
climb into the house

I like the color
the vibrant lime of the green
pulsates in my soul
LIME LICKING GREEN GRASSY GIGGLES
pulsates in my soul
the vibrant lime of the green
I like the color
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4 comments:

  1. Andy SewinaMarch 4, 2009 at 1:33 PM

    Love both the Haiku.. the titles are wonderful, especially the second one... yeah both of these read so well !!

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  2. Wendy NaisaMarch 4, 2009 at 1:44 PM

    Hiya Ande, Mother sounds like she's in a discipliarian mood today, but this makes great poetry. 'Lime licking green grassy giggles' what a great image you have created here!

    Thanks for taking the NaisaiKu.. Challenge! again this week, don't forget you can clink~The Mister Linky links to find out what the other participants are writing.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 4, 2009 at 11:27 PM

    this was a double treat !!! u remind me of my mom in the first one ;) ! miss her so much since i stay so far from her .. keep writing such sweet things !!

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  4. AnonymousMarch 5, 2009 at 6:23 AM

    that was a delight to read. and i love 'lime licking green grassy giggles' haha. how fun. :)

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